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    Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G

    Started by PBNGJNG at 2013/07/31 06:49PM
    Latest post: 2013/08/06 06:53AM, Views: 640, Replies: 14
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    #1   2013/07/31 06:49PM
    Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    FAN FICTION #19

    Scene 1:

    Zach is sitting in his office at the Casino holding a file he just read containing DNA results for Zoey. It wasn’t hard to get samples for her, his Dad and obviously himself. Well it is true and Zoey is a Cambias. It is also apparent that she has no clue who her father really is and what he is. The question now for Zach is how does he tell her? Maybe more important should he tell her? What is in her best interest? Zach has been accused of playing “God” in the past. Making decisions he felt were in the best interest of the people in his life. He has tried to change over the years and no do it any more but in this circumstance would his interference be a blessing to Zoey or a curse?

    Scene 2:

    Tim and Brot are on break and getting a cup of coffee in the park. A man and woman with a young child approaches them.

    “Excuse me Officers, my wife, daughter and I were just at the playground and there is a man just sitting there by himself, it doesn’t appear he is with anyone or even has a child with him.” says the man.

    “Is he doing anything strange, or threatening?” Brot asks him.

    “Well no,” says the man. “But it does seem strange that he would be there. My wife and I thought since we saw you we would at least report it to you.” He says.

    “Thank you for the information,” Brot tells them.

    “Well I guess we should check it out,” Brot says to Tim.

    They walk over to the playground and sure enough there is a young man sitting on a bench doing nothing in particular but as the people told him it does not appear he has any children with him. Brot and Tim approach him.

    “Excuse me Sir,” Tim says to the young man.

    The man doesn’t turn around but just sits there quietly.

    “I said excuse me sir would you mind turning around we would like to talk to you for minute,” says Brot.

    The young man still sits there ignoring the two police officers.

    Suddenly Tim shoves the young man and pushes him onto the ground. Then he grabs his wrist and throws the cuffs on him and quickly turns him around. “Now are you going to cooperate with us now?” asks Tim.

    Brot is shocked that Tim would use such a rough technique on someone who while not being cooperative to their questions posed no threat to them at that moment. “What are you doing?” Brot asks Tim?

    “He needs to learn some manners and how to listen to an Officer of the Law,” says Tim to Brot.

    Tim helps the man stand up and so far he still has not said anything to either of them. They walk him to their police car and start to drive to the station.

    Scene 3:

    Jackson is at the Yacht Club going over the finishing touches with one of his assistants before his press conference declaring his intent to run for Governor of Pennsylvania. He sees Krystal walk in and tells his assistant to take care of what they just went over and walks to me her.

    “How you doing, are you nervous?” Krystal asks him.

    “No I am cool as a cucumber as long as I have you here by my side,” he tells her.

    I spoke to Ryan earlier and he said that he and Greenlee will be here when you announce,” she tells him. “Lily called after you left, she was sorry she couldn’t get here today but will try to help you as much as she can during the campaign but only behind the scenes where she can possible work on numbers and statistics.” Says Krystal to Jack.

    “Bianca called me yesterday and said that she and Marissa would do whatever they could for the campaign but thought that maybe it might be better if they kept a lower profile today. I told them definitely not. That they were part of this family and I want the here front and center with everyone else.” Jack says.

    Krystal looks at Jack and remembers that his love of his family was one of the things she loved most about him.

    To be continued…

    P.S. I have been watching AMC since 1976 and during that time I have had the pleasure of sharing that experience with family, friends and yes even my late husband. Now however I watch the show alone the past years and enjoy writing my Random Thought article as well as this new venture Fan Fiction. I am pleased when I see people have read my posts as it makes me feel connected to all of you out there. Thanks for all your support. I would anytime love to here what you have to say about either one of my posts.

    Sincerely

    Patti G

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    #2   2013/08/01 06:19AM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    Zoey is a Cambias so it will be interesting to see how she deals with the truth that her father Alexander Cambias, Sr. is not only her father but that he is a murderer, I would love to see how Zoey can come to terms with all of that or even what her reaction will be

    But more importantly I want to see her reaction to finding out that Zach is her brother and how she comes to terms with that

    But also I want to see how Zoey reacts to the fact that Michael Cambias was her brother too but that her brother was also a rapist who raped Bianca and got her pregnant and that Miranda is really her niece but also that her brother tried raping Erica and Kendall but that Michael committed so many other crimes, I wonder how Zoey will be able to deal with that

    Because we all know Zoey will find out the truth about who she really is, sooner or later because secrets always have a way of coming out whether we want them to or not

    And as for Brot and Natalia I really hope that they do end up becoming parents soon in the sense that they do end up having a baby soon

    But as for Amanda's brother Tim as far as love interests go, why not put Tim in Greenlee's orbit creating a triangle with Ryan? Or hell how about putting Tim with Kendall or there are a lot of women who you could bring back for Tim like Anita Santos or putting him with Cara or bringing a woman back from the dead to put with Tim like Erin Lavery Ryan's sister or Simone Torres even or hell even having an OLTL character cross over into Pine Valley with Tim falling for her

    I loved how you mentioned Jack's family but you didn't mention Jack's son, Reggie Montgomery, it would have been nice to have a Reggie mention like maybe where Reggie is or even how he's doing would have been nice

    Or how about Jack's nephew Bianca's half-brother Sean Montgomery, or how about Jack's other niece Bianca's half-sister Molly Montgomery even, it would have been nice for them to be mentioned too

    But here is hoping you have other characters show up in your fan fiction like JR, Colby, Asher, Caleb, Dixie, etc.

    #3   2013/08/01 06:44AM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    But for Angie's brother Ted since he is apparently dying, from what we've seen you write, Ted has an ex-wife and 2 children, so it begs the question of just how old Ted's children are or how old you will have them be? But also more importantly what his children's names are and if he has 2 sons or 2 daughters or 1 son and 1 daughter

    But here is hoping you have a Chandler Enterprises vs Cortlandt Electronics war coming with the Chandler/Cortlandt feud being reignited after all these decades

    #4   2013/08/02 08:54AM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    First thanks for your input. As far as what you wrote. Zoey will have a lot of info to process about being a Cambias and the crimes her Uncle Michael and her Father have done. She will also need to deal with if her Mother knew about all this and why her Mother never told her. There could be some unresolved anger there. She also will have to get use to having a brother and additional extended family. As a Cambias she would be entitled to some inheritance I would think, part of Cambias maybe.

    Even though Kendall is now in a coma, what kind of relationship will they have if she wakes up?

    Zoey will also have to deal with the "shame" of being a Cambias when and if people learn of her family relationship.

    I will be dealing with Natalia and Brot and any family addition in the future. Like maybe Natalia wants to put off motherhood because of her job and Brot wants to start now. That could cause some friction between them.

    I have plans for Tim and that include a possible relationship with Zoey. They are both living at the Boarding House. There also might be a new boarder who comes to town and joins them in a love triangle.

    I appreciate your mention of Reggie, Sean and Molly. I have plans to bring back Reggie soon. I am not so sure about Molly and Sean at this time, but always a possibility.

    The other characters you mentioned are always a possibility and you never know who will be showing up.

    #5   2013/08/02 08:57AM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    Ted ex-wife will probably make an appearance some time in the future. I have not made any decision on how I am going to present that character yet. As for his children they will probably be grown, (roughly the same age as Angie and Jesse's kids). I have some thoughts about one of them becoming involved romantically with another upcoming character. Again thank you for you input.

    #6   2013/08/02 12:36PM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    With Zoey being a Cambias with Alexander Sr. being her father it would make Michael and Zach her brothers but also Ethan Cambias would have been her nephew since Ethan was Zach's son but since Zach has his son Ian, Zoey will have another nephew and since Spike is Kendall's son with Ryan it would make Spike her step-nephew since Zach is Spike's step-father

    But even so with Zoey being a Cambias yes she does have to live with the shame of the crimes her brother Michael and her father Alexander committed

    But even then she will have to see just why her brother Zach changed his name from Alexander Cambias, Jr. to Zach Slater and faked his death just to escape being a Cambias, Zoey will fear just being like her father and brother

    Oh I just had an idea, I do not even know why I didn't think about it, it would make so much sense

    How about pairing up Ted's daughter Angie's niece with Reggie Montgomery, Jack's adopted son? It's perfect, then you could have another African-American couple

    Or instead have Angie's daughter Cassandra be paired up with Reggie

    I wonder if you will bring back any villains of the past

    #7   2013/08/02 01:14PM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    Or hell are there any mob families in Pine Valley's history that could cause some rumblings? Because if that is the case then you could have the Pine Valley Police Department be on their toes

    #8   2013/08/03 05:46PM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    You have some great ideas and I have written them down. Certain things are already in the works.

    #9   2013/08/03 05:47PM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    No there are not, but the story could happen.

    #10   2013/08/03 07:23PM
    Re: Fan Fiction Episode #19 By Patti G
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    Well with Jack and Krystal as a couple, I just can't see Erica allowing them to be happy because something tells me Erica still loves Jack but even so is she with Caleb Cortlandt? If that is the case then you can have a Jack, Krystal, Erica and Caleb quad which then could ultimately lead to Caleb and Krystal becoming a couple or even Jack and Erica getting back together

    And how about Adam's bastard son, Miguel Reyes, do you have plans on bringing Miguel to Pine Valley? Miguel being the illegitimate son of Adam from a one-night-stand Adam had with Miguel's mother Sonia Reyes and that Miguel was supposed to donate bone marrow to save his brother JR but then Miguel never showed up leaving JR to die so I wonder if you will have Miguel finally show up

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